LR Reponse Blog Assessment

 


1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

WWW - Made some good points here which shows your potential to reach higher grades. now we need to develop our revision and exam techniques to progress.

EBI - Revise Technology and the unseen text so we can pick up the 1 mark answers.

EBI - Revise the film csp so you can use detailed accurate examples from them.

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully (you'll need your Greenford Google login to access this). Write down the mark you achieved for each question:


Q1: 0 Marks

Q2: 0 Marks

Q3: 3 Marks

Q4: 1/2 Marks

Q5: 1/2 Mark

Q6: 9/20 Marks


Where you didn't achieve full marks, write WHY you think you missed out on the extra marks. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to help with this. If you got any media terminology wrong in the assessment you can make a note of it here.

- In question 6, I should've added more point to I Daniel Blake in more depth as it was lacking detail and revise certain figures in the csp.

3) Look specifically at question 3 - did you successfully write about both the preferred and oppositional readings? Did your answers match any in the mark scheme? Copy in one answer from the mark scheme that you could have used. 

Preferred Reading- Women are strong patriotic and should join the war effort - they are empowered.

I used both preferred and oppositional reading to a good extent where I was able to differentiate the three readings. However I could split them into two clear paragraphs to show the difference in the readings.

4) Now look at question 4. Write a definition of vertical integration plus the benefits of it listed in the mark scheme to revise this key industry terminology. You may find the blogpost on ownership and control helpful here.

Vertical Integration is ownership over other major companies in a whole one chain + the benefits of using vertical integration is that:

-Maximise Profit

-Control over the creative process

5) Finally, look at your 20-mark essay - question 6. Read this exemplar answer to help give you an idea of what a top-level response looks like. Then, write five points from either the exemplar answer or the mark scheme that you could have used in your answer. This will be excellent revision for a future film industry exam question. 

- Statistics: 2 Million

- Revise figures relating to CSPs

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